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英语六级作文范文精讲:我的梦想

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  my dream

英语六级作文范文精讲:我的梦想

everyone has a lot of dreams . some people want to be rich , dreaming of becoming millionaires overnight . othe rs want to be famous , dreaming of suddenly jumping to gr eat fame . i have a lot of dr eams , too . when i was a young gir l , i dreamed of becoming a scientist like hua luogen in future . howeve r , i k new ve ry well tha t i could not succeed without painstaking effor ts . so i studied ha rd in the middle school and college in order to at tain my goal .

after graduating from college , i found a job as a teache r . although i was very busy with teaching , i never gave up my goal . i read a lot of books to get more knowledge . i made experiments to pr actise and apply what i had lea rnt f rom the book s . sometimes , i was so deeply indulged in my resea rch that i forgot my meals and time . now i have made gr ea t progress . sever al of my r esea rch pape rs have been published . the methods proposed in my papers have been proven to be valuable for the solution of some problems . i am very happy . the ladde r of becoming a scientist is still far ahead , but i have climbed the first rung anyway .

  cet6六级作文结构分析:

·everybody has a lot of dreams

* some people’s dreams

* other people’s dreams

* my dream

· how i realize my dream

* study hard

* work hard

* achievements so far made

* a long way to go

  cet6六级作文内容分析:

本文为一篇记叙文。文中第一段为夹叙夹议, 以general comment 开头, 引出“我的梦想”。第二段为作者为实现梦想所做的努力和取得的成果, 最后一句“成为科学家的阶梯还遥遥在上, 但我至少已攀登了第一级。”既是总结又是方向。此句摹仿了jack london 的`散文“what life mean s to me”中的一句精彩句子。

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  cet6六级作文万能句型

dream of 梦想

jump to great fame 一举成名

be indulged in . . . 沉缅于

propose v . 提出

ladde r n . 梯子

rung n . (梯子的)级