在前几单元中,我们谈到写段落的第一个步骤是写主题句。作者要对主题句在某些方面加以限制。第二个步骤将是写推展句。例如你要陈述你选择某院校的'理由,第一步,写出主题句:
There are two main reasons why I have decided to attend Bingston University next year.
第二步,以数个理由推展你的主题:
示范段落4-1
① There are two main reasons why I have decided to attend Bingston University next year.② First of all, there is the question of money:Bingstonvs tuition is reasonable and I dont even have to pay it all at once.③ This is very important, since my father is not a rich man.④ With Bingstons deferred payment plan, my father will be able to pay my tuition without too much difficulty.⑤The second resaon is the fine education which I feed will receive there in agriculture, my chosen field.⑥ It is a well-known fact that Bingston hires only the finest professors in its Agriculture Department.⑦ Moreover, the university reqires all agricultural students to get practical experience by working on farms in the areawhile they are still going to school.
4.2示范段落分析
细节: two main reasons:
理由 1financial consideration②
a. reasonable tuition③